Tuesday 6 November 2012

Www: You have pitched out some relevant details in places but...

EBI: You haven’t answered either question. In q1 you say a lot about tension and seriousness, but not much on realism. In q2, you needed to write about the representation of Americans/foreign people. You also needed to write about stereotypes.  

LR: write a new paragraph for q2 that uses the word stereotype and talks about non Americans.

In United 93 non-Americans are shown as terrorists. This is because they want to make a stereotype in the audiences mind because they want them to think that non-Americans are also causing trouble to America. The evidence of them being terrorists is that they all look serious and nervous when they are in the plain, which suggests that they are up to something and are going to cause trouble.  

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